I was going through Jazzy's version of the script, seeing if there were any scenes that could potentially be condensed. For the section where the crow approaches the scarecrow just after the crash, what if the scarecrow was on his back instead of his front? The crow could approach and sit on his chest, which would probably make the following point-of-view shot where the crow lunges forward make a bit more sense? We could get some really nice eye contact in there too, which as Jazzy said is really important for that scene — a setup like this would mean we can make it more direct and do it in fewer cuts.
What do you guys think? :)
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