Scene 16 V5

Scene 16



Ugh, another surprisingly tricky one. Few things I'm not really happy with in terms of timing — the beak snapping shut being one of them (too slow?).

I really don't like the head as it comes back down - the blur isn't necessary as she turns her head back, but it looks choppy and ridiculous without it. I think I just need to make more heads, maybe have her face towards the camera a little more?

Overall I think she should be a little quicker though, bit too slow and evenly timed at the moment. Doesn't really move much like a bird. Still, it's a start!

Oh... and don't mind the background, I know it's different to the previous scene; not even started messing with that yet ;]