I made two versions of this scene. There's only so much I can do with it since it's only showing the open door, so the first version is the same boring thing we've seen before.
v1
v2
I do like how warm the colours look but there's something about it that doesn't quite look right. Maybe it's because it looks too much like a spotlight. Then again I don't think even lighting will do me any favours. I'd love to hear anyone's opinion about it :]
What I do like about it is when it fades away the light focuses on the door before it goes completely. I think that's a nice focus point for the audience.
I absolutely love the lighting here Jazzy, it's gorgeous! The light focusing on the door is, as you say, a wonderful touch. Looks amazing!
ReplyDeleteI know all the timings are laid out in the animatic but if I may make a suggestion? To me it seems as if the first pan (to the right) stops a little abruptly — perhaps try applying an "easy ease" to that last keyframe just to soften it a little? I also feel as if it perhaps holds on the barn door just a little too long before it starts zooming, but that could just be personal preference.
Feel free to disagree — just my own two cents, it looks wonderful so far however :] Great job!
No, sounds good. I think you're right about the sudden stop, didn't notice that before ^^; and I'll shorten the hold on the door for version 3 :]
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